Six hundred and sixteen characters, forty-four couplets, one night on the river — and a musician and a poet who recognise the same ruin in each other.
Slide 16 carries a hidden answer key — press A to reveal, or print the deck for a handout.
Ask: what does a writer do with an assignment to fail? (He listens, and then he writes down exactly what he heard.)
Autumn night, river, maples and reeds. The host dismounts; wine is raised — but there is no music to drink to. The joy never comes.
Suddenly a pipa from a neighbouring boat. The host forgets to go home; his guest will not set sail.
Called a thousand times, she appears holding the instrument, half-covering her face. Two or three strokes — and the feeling is already there.
She plays; the poem plays with her. Her life surfaces in sound: the capital, the applause, the slow fade, the merchant's empty boat.
He describes his own exile — no music, low ground, bitter bamboo, cuckoo and gibbon. Two ruined people, one sentence.
She plays again, differently. The whole company weeps. The last image: the poet's blue official robe, soaked through.
Reading tip: the poem is a frame narrative — the poet's night, containing her story, containing his. Ask students to mark where the narration shifts hands.
| Chinese simile | What you hear |
|---|---|
| 急雨 — sudden rain | volume, violence, the downpour |
| 私语 — private talk | intimacy, confession |
| 珠落玉盘 — pearls on jade | each note distinct, hard, bright |
| 间关莺语 — orioles in blossom | the songbird turn: lightness |
| 泉流冰下 — a spring under ice | the vein of lament, choked |
| 裂帛 — tearing silk | the final stroke: a tear |
| Technique | Where it shows |
|---|---|
| Sound as structure | Silence is prepared in line 1; the pipa fills the gap in line 5. |
| Mirror biography | Her decline, then his: two careers, identical shape. |
| Zoomorphic simile | Orioles, gibbon, cuckoo — the world answers the strings. |
| Concrete detail | "the horses grew scarce": decline measured by the crowd. |
| Self-incrimination | The host confesses before he praises — he buys the right to ask. |
| Closing image | Wet sleeve. Not the music, not the story: the fabric. |
| Expression | Literal sense | How to use it |
|---|---|---|
| 同是天涯沦落人 | We are both fallen souls at the edge of the world | Of two people who have been ruined in the same way. Rarely used ironically. |
| 老大嫁作商人妇 | grown old, she married and became a merchant's wife | "She's married a tradesman." Register: rueful, unpretentious. |
| 门前冷落鞍马稀 | before my door, the horses grew scarce | "The customers stopped coming." Used of fading fame, popularity, business. |
| 此时无声胜有声 | here, no sound at all says more than sound | Silence carries more than speech. Very widely used; slightly formal. |
| 别时茫茫江浸月 | as we parted, the wide river drowned the moon | At parting, the scene overwhelms the people in it. |
Submission: one typed page + one paragraph of commentary on your own choices.
Useful for pointing, for reading aloud, and for showing students that a translation is an argument, not a window.
Preface (序): 元和十年,予左迁九江郡司马。明年秋,送客湓浦口,闻舟中夜弹琵琶者……凡六百一十六言,命曰《琵琶行》。